WALT show not tell in our writing
I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking
I will leave the audience hanging
He dragged his hands down his face in stress. Bang Bang Bang he was pounding the wall like King Kong. His face started to boil as he wiped the sweat from his forehead. He throw a chair at his mirror with tears running down his cold cheek. He started to think how he was going to fix what he had done..…..